A Winter Pond
Sting-chill of winter matt –Her frozen hand caressed us all;
And calming bleach of silence
Pressed upon the rustic scape
To leave an ashen underbelly –
Once raging summer chroma.
Even Winter’s gelid lungs laboured
Under heavy drag of flakes –
Their pilgrimage: to stay a deadened floor
In crunch-white peace.
And round about, the weight of time
– Collapsing under Winter’s drag –
Transmutes to grey: it’s three o’clock –
No lights pricking black out here! –
Even the night globe,
The Great Reflector – stonewalled;
Camouflaged by lead-laden cloud
Lolling in the claustrophobic noon.
At ground, a farm pond –
Seized in a dark hiatus –
Offered up repentance –
Why, it dared to harbour life!
I forgave it in my desperate gaze
Upon the crazy-paving surface,
That sealed in the black-chill temperature,
Where at bottom, something nithered
Still survived.
Mark R Slaughter http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-winter-pond/
I found this poem whilst wandering around t'internet thinking about the cold and the impending snow. I really like it in general as I spend a lot of time staring at my pond in all seasons. It is as fascinating in Winter as it is in the Summer. I try and peer through the frozen surface to see if anything is moving below. I have, in years past, seen frogs frozen under its waters. That was horrible, I assume they were dead. I did fish one body out but never found any more, I shudder to think of it even now.
I love the language of this poem; I fully admit I had never heard of the word 'gelid', to me it sounds like it has escaped from the poem Jabberwocky. It means 'very cold, icy or frosty'; I know you all know that, I just explained it to remind myself really. It is my new favourite word. I shall go into work and say 'ooh its a bit gelid out there today' and they shall all nod in agreement.
I do love words that are new to me.
You learn something new everyday. Gelid - another one to add to our vocabulary :)
ReplyDeletegreat word isn't it :)
DeleteLove this poem it's new to me but conjures up a freezing day in the countryside perfectly. I too have a pond and after the big freeze of Jan 2012 in France we were surprised to find it had about 30 goldfish in it who had survived. As for a frozen frogs unfortunately a handful of very dead and smelly frogs that floated to the surface of another thawing pond in a tiny town garden gave our daughter then around two a phobia of frogs.
ReplyDeleteMy pond is quite deep, but there are no fish in it, I just hope there are no frogs this year trapped in it, I can understand why it upset your daughter.
DeleteGelid, what a splendid word. Much better than the thought of frozen frogs.
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